Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello I am Hosanna from Waikowhai Primary School. I thought it was really cool that you were describing your family in a nice way. Maybe next time you could describe what the writing is about so I would know more. I really liked the photos of the animals, they were really cute. Anyway blog ya later.
Hi my name is Ayana I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I think your blog was kind of that you made your dad a gorilla and made yourself a monkey. I really liked the way you put kind information about your family. It reminds me of the time I was drawing animals with chalk and telling my family which one they are. Maybe next time you could you could put on animal pictures of your cousins. See you next time.
Hello I am Hosanna from Waikowhai Primary School. I thought it was really cool that you were describing your family in a nice way. Maybe next time you could describe what the writing is about so I would know more. I really liked the photos of the animals, they were really cute. Anyway blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ayana I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I think your blog was kind of that you made your dad a gorilla and made yourself a monkey. I really liked the way you put kind information about your family. It reminds me of the time I was drawing animals with chalk and telling my family which one they are. Maybe next time you could you could put on animal pictures of your cousins. See you next time.
ReplyDeletehi I am Mana from Ahipara school thank you so much for commenting on my blog post. I will definitely youse the things you said that will help me.
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