Walt: Show don't tell.
In-Room 5 we have been about what we did over the school holidays.
Can you guess where I went?
Reflection:
I really enjoyed adding all of the pictures.
I found it hard to think of what to write.
Maybe next time I could add mor detail.
Kia ora Mana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your Show, Don't tell writing about your trip to a lighthouse (that's my guess) and the way you used the five senses to describe what you did. Maybe next time you could work on proofreading your blurb and checking your spelling in your Reflection. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Hi Mana I really like your slide about show don't tell it is so cool! Maybe next time you could check your spelling. Keep up the good work. By Kahurangi.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Diontay and i really like your blog It's got a nice background and great work keep it up mana Good job
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mana - Whakaritenga, my name is Jaelyn - Marie and I am a year six student from Paihia School. I like your blog post about “show don’t tell” because I like the background you used because it suits what you were talking about. I also like your blog because your pictures described what your were talking about. I’ve done something similar to this but I was telling them instead of showing them. I think you went to the beach.
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Kia ora Mana, it's Hemi from your class. I really like your blog post, the background suits your work you made and also the pictures are cool. Your work is really interesting and describes your setting well. Blog ya later.
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