How to write a good comment

 

We were learning about how to write a good and respectful blog comment.

I found it easy to put the words in order.

I found it hard to find big words.

I really enjoyed it because it is super fun and interesting.

The ruler

 The ruler

Once upon a time, there were two twins names Tangata and Te Rangi. They had a little sister named

Te Aomihia. They all lived in a small town called    Moranga. Moranga was a  town on an island called Tomatoinga. It was located in the middle of the pacific. 

 

They were one big happy family ´til one day the twins were caught stealing some of the town’s valuable items- gold! Their father said they did the wrong thing by stealing the gold. 

Little did they know it was the Crowning Ceremony later that day. Their father told them that they will be punished. They asked him what the punishment would be. Silence fell.  With his powerful, voice the father told them, ¨Your sister will be the new queen¨. They both moaned loudly. The father then told them ¨Go get ready for the ceremony. It's in 5 minutes¨. They got ready then they all met in the ballroom. As soon as their sister got her Crown they became more jealous than ever.

At least a week went by, Tangata and Te Rangi could not stand it anymore. Te Aomihia thought what their father did was wrong. The brothers and the sister met in the bush, they made a brilliant plan. Te Aomihia Was going to convince their father to let them all rule. The father finally agreed. The ceremony was held in the ballroom. 

For many  more years the family lived happily ever after!