Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia Ora Mana-Whakaritenga! Its Angelina from Waikowhai Primary School in Waitemata. I liked your slideshow. I also liked the reasons why you wouldn't live in a small house. Maybe next time you could add a paragraph what you did and why you did it. Maybe it was a task? Also maybe next time you could add more reasons why you wouldn't like to live in a small house and maybe check your spelling. One reason I wouldn't live in a small house is because I might have to share a room with my sister. That wouldn't be nice! I really liked the colors you used. Please check out my blog! http://wpsangelinac.blogspot.com/ Blog you later!
Talofa Mana, My name is Faith I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I love the way you said why you would not to live in a tiny house. I liked why you said why you wouldn't stay in a tiny house because you had a very good explanation about it. This reminds me when I had to stay in a tiny room room to babysit my baby cousin .Maybe next time you could add some more information so I could read even more of why you don't like staying in a tiny house. Blog you later Layla!
Kia Ora Mana-Whakaritenga! Its Angelina from Waikowhai Primary School in Waitemata. I liked your slideshow. I also liked the reasons why you wouldn't live in a small house. Maybe next time you could add a paragraph what you did and why you did it. Maybe it was a task? Also maybe next time you could add more reasons why you wouldn't like to live in a small house and maybe check your spelling. One reason I wouldn't live in a small house is because I might have to share a room with my sister. That wouldn't be nice! I really liked the colors you used.
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Blog you later!
Talofa Mana, My name is Faith I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I love the way you said why you would not to live in a tiny house. I liked why you said why you wouldn't stay in a tiny house because you had a very good explanation about it. This reminds me when I had to stay in a tiny room room to babysit my baby cousin .Maybe next time you could add some more information so I could read even more of why you don't like staying in a tiny house. Blog you later Layla!
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